The Macabre Masterpiece: Poems of Horror and Gore by Justin Bienvenue
My rating: 1 of 5 stars
Let the red run slowly into the stream
In this river your hands will not be washed clean
Guilt will arise and your skin will stain
Plain and drained to the vein from those you’ve slain
The Macabre Masterpiece is a collection of short poems with a Gothic feel to them, mainly due to the subject matter – blood, vampires, and the like. It attempted to shed new light on this subject matter, using poetry as the medium.
There were various rhyming patterns utilized, and many of the rhymes sounded forced, as if the sentence was purposely convoluted to ensure the rhyme happened at the end of the line. Also of note, there was little to no punctuation, creating a run-on of words with no pauses for breath indicated.
While the blurb promised in-dept poems, most of them were very superficial and could have been giving more depth – more gore, more horror – instead of just simply describing the subject. There was no “showing,” simply “telling” the reader – sometimes in creative ways – how blood looks or how death is.
Quick horror poems portraying vampires, murderers, and blood, The Macabre Masterpiece takes a light-to-the-night and the creatures crawling there, but leaves the reader with only a Dr. Seuss headache.
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A Story not Wished to be Read by Nicola Black
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
Are you willing to risk
Getting lost in the shadows
To bring me light?
This collection of poems takes the reader down the mental wanderings every reader can relate to. Tales of love, loss, pain, faith, etc. are all wrapped up in neat little poetry lines, begging the reader to understand and delve into deeper thought.
A Story not Wished to be Read is a misleadingly quick read – it will have you thinking about those words long after you turn the pages.
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Today I bring to you a book of poetry by Nicola Black as part of the Making Connections book tour. First, a little Q&A with Nicola!
TK: Since this is a book of poems, do you have a favorite? One that speaks to you above the others?
NB: I think it would be a toss up between Tell Me and He Was There. They both started as songs for me, and I catch myself singing them sometimes. They represent two prominent areas of my life. Tell Me questions existent and wonders if there’s a purpose for an individual, and He Was There, though written before I started dating my boyfriend, really describes our relationship and how I feel about him. *blushes*
TK: Where do you get your inspiration from?
NB: My inspiration was from life really. Observing it and experiencing it. Going through the usual teen angst and coming out the other side more mature and secure. And of course I am influenced by different mediums. I see something on TV or read something, and it just clicks for me. I have to write something down then.
TK: Who’s your favorite author? Genre?
NB: My favorite author is Charles Dickens actually. But my favorite genre is fantasy. Kind of a contradiction I think. 🙂
TK: What are you working on now? Can you give us an idea of what you’re novels will be about?
NB: I’m working on three novels and a collection of short stories. The first novel I started was A Spy of Kings. It’s about a young spy in another world who is sent on a dangerous mission with her dragon. Along the way, she meets sarcastic Arnold the warlock, and charming Jaquoven Wolf, the crime lord. The second book I’m working on is Telepathetic. Kiera thinks she’s going insane because she hears a voice in her head. But the voice insists that he’s real. The newest novel is an experiment for me. It’s called Numb Killings and is about a woman telling of her murders from person. It’s not too gory though. My collection of short stories is entitled Nightmares and Dreams. I have a friend who describes them as psychological thrillers.